Assalaamualaikum, Wr.Wb
I have friend, her name's Evi, she's full name is Bintan Devianur Putri. She was born in Gresik at 15 July 1996, now she's 13 years old. She is a student in SMPN 1 Sidayu, she's class 7e, she's classmate.
Her hobby are eat and watching TY, She's favourite food is fried rice, She's favourite drink is ice tea and she's favourite colour is blue. She's thin, white, beautiful, high, and clever. She have straighand black hair, pointed nose and black eyes.
She's live in Banyu urip village, She's has one big house. She's has one brother's his name is Akbar, Her body are big, short, and black. And she's have one sister, She's name is Salsa. His body are small, beautiful and white...
Wassalaamualaikum Wr.Wb
Assalamualaikum............
BalasHapusLia your blog is very good and your write is good too.I lile your bloger.But in paragraph 3 you don't give paragraph,paragraph 3 too still wrong that is her body are big,short,and black,should that is his body is big,short,and black.And still there is again that is his body are small,beautiful,and white should that is her body is small,beautiful,and white.
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assalamualikum................!
BalasHapuslia your second posting is little.but,it is very good!!!so, I like it.and there is little decrease like that wafy.But your decrease different with wafy.you write "his name is akbar,HER body ARE big,short,and black. you must write"his name is akbar,His body IS big and short.his skin is black.please change it.ok???????????
Thanks!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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BalasHapusLia your blog and your writing is good and I like this, but in paragraph 2 you write watching TY, actually watching TV. please Change ok!!!!!!!!!!!!?????????//
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Assalamualaikum....
BalasHapusyour blog is verry good.but in paragraph three your write "His body are small, beautiful and white."actually "her body are small,beautiful and white."
THAK'S VERY MUCH.
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BalasHapusYour posting is very good, but I can found your mistake in paragraph 3
Your mistake at sentences" And she's have one sister, She's name is Salsa. His body are small, beautiful and white..." actually you must write" And she's have one sister, She's name is Salsa. Her body are small, beautiful and white...
Thank`s ...?!!?!
Assalamualaikum Wr. Wb.
BalasHapusLi'a... Your blog and your writing is G..O..O..D. But,in paragraph 2, you write "she's favourite colour is blue" actually, you write "Her favourite color is blue"
THANK YOU...
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